I'm planning on promoting Tor in the upcoming Project for Awesome 2014. Within my video, I plan on pointing people to this site, but linking to the site tour/rules first.
Here is the script for the video that I plan on making. Is there anything in here that is inaccurate or that I should modify? Do I make it clear enough about what this site should be used for?
I thought I would post this on Meta since it's more discussion oriented and deals with the community as a whole.
UPDATE: You can watch the final (somewhat brutal) result here.